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Tuesday, 21 October 2008

Salamanders and Fires of War

It's true, I've been conspicuous by my absence of late on the blog.

The reason for it, specifically, is the Salamanders short story I'm still writing for the Heroes of the Space Marines anthology.

Incidentally, this book is something of two firsts for me (if that actually makes sense...) as it'll be the first time my name as author has appeared on an anthology (very proud of that fact I am too) and the first time that my name has appeared on a novel twice (as editor and author). Crazy, but cool. It's genuinely quite humbling to share a byline with such talented guys like Graham McNeill, Steve Parker and Chris Roberson. My hat is off to you both.

Still digressing, this is going to be something of packed anthology. It's looking like a hefty 320-416 pages depending on typesetting and the final word count, and there are a LOT of different Chapters covered, too (some which haven't had literary treatment before). It's a pretty eclectic mix with Traitors appearing alongside Loyalists. And I must also mentioned the cover. A chap called Hardy Fowler illustrated this. He's a new cover artist for the Black Library. I'm sure everyone will have their opinions on this, but I absolutely love it. So dynamic and just screaming WAR! at the top of it's voice.

So, back on track and back to the short story I've been slaving over...

Fires of War has taken up a lot of my time as I tune, fine tune and then tune some more (hopefully to perfection). It has certainly been a challenge for me as well as being a pretty meaty tale, too. I reckon, once it is done, it'll weigh in at around 20,000 words. Lots of Salamander action for all Space Marine fans there then.

I'm nearing the final hurdle now, with about 2,000 words to go (I think - it's never easy to be that sure about these things). Cheekily, I've name checked a couple of folks in the story (well, their Salamander alter-egos anyway) - Brother Argos and Librarian Pyriel, you know who you are.

Contrary to some reports I read, this story won't be set on Nocturne or even Prometheus. I actually want to save that for the novel that comes after (now called Salamander - as in singular - by the way. To digress again, I wanted to call the novel Fire Born but this was poo-pooed as it didn't have the same cache and name recognition as Salamanders. In the end, I capitulated on the condition that we dropped the 's' making it plural, so that it at least didn't sound like a codex. I figured Salamander - although there are a fair few in the book, one of them is the main protagonist, so it kind of fits - had slightly more gravitas). The tale does contain some scenes, by way of a memory dream, of Nocturne and a few places/landmarks I've devised as part of the world building necessary to visualise and realise the Salamanders' homeworld. Incidentally, this conceptualisation was helped immeasurably by scouring what crumbs of background I could about this death world and through Vulkan's Forge, which is an excellent site run and devised by a distinguished gentleman called David Johnston (again, hope I got the name right, David - I don't know because you never post a comment... hint :-)).

By way of a sneak preview, Fires of War takes place on an Imperial World called Stratos, which consists of a series of loft-cities (floating cities, buoyed up on huge plasma-fuelled, gravitic engines) suspended on a roiling oceanic maelstrom. The planet is blighted by an internecine cult uprising that the native Imperial Guard stationed on the world, the Stratosan Aircorps, are woefully ill-equipped to deal with (as the cultists are getting help from an outside source...). Essentially, the Salamanders respond to their astropathic distress call and make landfall on the planet intending to cleanse and burn the cultists out of their urban occupation in short order. Sadly, all does not go according to plan and what seems like a very simple mission, through a series of misfortunes, turns into a nightmare for the Salamanders.

In this tale their courage and sense of humanity is tested to the absolute limit. They'll face some very hard moral decisions and their tenacious refusal to never give up and always fight on to the bitter end will be sorely pressed to breaking point. I don't want to go into too much detail here as I probably won't do it justice, and will just go and spoil it for all you readers.

Suffice it to say that the story introduces several major and minor players that will appear in the novel, not least of which the two rival sergeants Dak'ir and Tsu'gan - these two have very differing ideas about how the campaign against the cultists should be fought and offer a little insight into how the hierarchical structure of the Sanctuary Cities on Nocturne operates (thanks to David for that term - it's perfect). And before you ask, no they are not all the same, nor are the cultures/peoples on the planet. But again, more of that in the novel proper. Perhaps most intriguing (well, it was for me to write them anyway) is the appearance of what will become a recurring nemesis of the Salamanders. Something I guarantee has not been seen before.

I have deliberately written this tale so that it does not have to be read to appreciate and enjoy the novel, but it will add texture and a little background to reward those who have read it.

Anywho, that's enough for now - I have a short story to finish!

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10 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

This all sounds better and better with each new blog!

I picked up Assault on Black Reach: The Novel a week or two back and read it pretty swiftly (not hard to imagine, given the size of it) and overall: I was very impressed by your treatment of the Ultramarines as credible (and dynamic) characters and as Astartes. Altogether, I'd rate it as the better end of Space Marine fiction (alongside Gav's Angels of Darkness).

Now it's just a long wait until March, July and September.

23 October 2008 at 17:11  
Blogger Nick Kyme said...

Hey Xisor,

Glad that you like what you're reading. I'm starting to build abd develop the narrative landscape for the Salamanders now and am constantly drawn back to the ideas of heroism, humanity and tenacity as their most salient character traits. The short story is quite a beast, actually, but covers a lot and hints at some Promethean culture too in the form of battle-rites and that kind of thing.

Thank you for your very kind comments on Assault on Black Reach. I thoroughly enjoyed doing the project and I think it taught me a lot about Space Marines in general (and writing about them - not as easy as it might first appear) that I will definitely take forward into Salamander. I would have liked to have done more with the piece, but a large story with a lot to fit in kind of precluded me from doing too much in terms of character development and the exploration of themes; a fact that won't inhibit me with the Salamander novel.

23 October 2008 at 17:54  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey Nick.
I must say I was a bit nervous when I started to read the Assault on black reach, I had some mixed experience with authors not really checking their background and transferring table top game characteristics onto their books and I had an ugly feeling that such a short novel might skip (to me) important things as proper "fluff".

But lo and behold, I found myself positively surprised as many things were well covered, included and dealt with despite it all having to be contained within the narrow frame of such a short novel.

I especially liked the inter struggle, different camps and the competing ambition between the various marines. I have never really been a fan of the blue guys always seeing them as stiff and stale clones without personality. Thanks for changing my view to the better of how I see the ultramarines dude:)

I read somewhere that the space marine heroes anthology will be out somewhere next summer, is it really that long left?
And does that also means the novel "Salamander" will be out even later?
Sometimes I wish I had a time machine but then, rather a thurough work then a rushed one I reckon.

And Brother Argos and Librarian Pyriel, wow, how awesome is that (librarians are my favorite characters too).
But that also leaves me with a the biggest of all questions...do I die?
Hehe, guess time will tell.

Well, keep up the good work and see you in the pages.

27 October 2008 at 06:37  
Blogger Nick Kyme said...

Hey Pyriel,

Glad you were pleasantly surprised about Assault on Black Reach.

I was slightly restricted with such a short novel (there was so much I wanted to say - I'd love to go back and tell a full-length novel story about 2nd Company and their continuing adventures).

It's good news for me, then, that I have an entire novel to do what I want to do with the Salamanders. I have thought long and hard, and researched and re-researched the subject. Part of the challenge for me, I think, is adding definition to this Chapter, as well as telling a great story. The short story, Fires of War, certainly introduces a lot of themes and subplots that will be explored and examined in the novel.

To be truthful, Librarian Pyriel is only namechecked a couple of times in the short, and doesn't actually feature as a character. However, he has more of a role in the novel, and (I plan) for him to featured very strongly in the second book.

Oh, and that means of course that he won't die in book one...

27 October 2008 at 20:08  
Blogger narrativium said...

Incidentally, this book is something of two firsts for me (if that actually makes sense...) as it'll be the first time my name as author has appeared on an anthology (very proud of that fact I am too)

I have a copy of Invasion!, signed by your good self, which says differently. Or was that story not originally commissioned for the anthology?

27 October 2008 at 22:53  
Blogger Nick Kyme said...

Ah, I was indeed in Invasion! (and Cold Hand of Betrayal and Tales of the Old World, to be pedantic), but it's the first time my name has been on the front of an anthology (sorry, I should have been more specific). Fair point though, Narry. :-)

28 October 2008 at 17:02  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi Nick, I've been an avid collector of my Salamanders marines for many, many years now. I am really looking forward to your upcoming releases especially the Sallies novel and short story. It sounds as if you are getting some good input from Argos and Pyriel (well done guys), I have been and active poster on the B&C for a fair while now and I know how passionate these guys are about the Sallies. So with baited breath I await!

29 October 2008 at 12:34  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Afternoon Nick,

The more I hear about your Salamanders fiction the more I want it in my hands. I will definitely be picking up both Heroes of the Space Marines and Salamander, and cannot wait to do so.

This probably isn't the place to ask, but a couple of weeks ago you suggested a few ideas for the Salamanders fiction I am working on about Vulkan He'stan and how he became the Forgefather. Now I am trying to conceptualize how I envision his character, and I was wondering what your thoughts would be on the subject?

The feeling I have for him is that he would be a sort of highly respected but shunned outcast. I'll explain what I mean and my reasoning for it, as I think I have the basis for a very interesting character piece. To do so I have to go back to what you said in one of your previous blog entries. You mentioned about the Salamanders persona, and how you found it interesting as to their belief structure.

The Salamanders are unique amongst the Astartes and to an extent the Imperium itself in that they genuinely care about the little guy - they are the shield of the Imperial citizenry. They will stop at nothing to protect and save every single citizen they can, even at the cost of their own lives. That this is contrary to their fearsome appearance makes for an interesting character study itself, and I see Vulkan He'stan as being the perfect case study for this, if you will.

He'stan is a Salamander, and will always be a Salamander. He will hold the same ideals as any other member of the chapter. During his time as Captain of the 4th Company he would have held these ideals as his top priority, nothing would have been more important to him than upholding these ideals and the honour of his chapter. Then comes his promotion to the rank of Forgefather, and the quest that comes with it. I see him accepting this promotion as both an honour and as a cataclysm - to him at the very least.

It would be an honour for He'stan to accept this role as Forgefather, to follow in the footsteps of all who have held the rank themselves, not to mention those of his Primarch. It is the highest honour a Salamander can aspire to. However it is also an upheaval - it turns his entire existence on its head. Here is this marine, a captain of the Salamanders, who’s sworn duty it is to protect those who cannot protect themselves. Now his duties have changed – he is honour-bound to find the missing artifacts of Vulkan – he has taken the Primarch’s name as a symbol of this – if he fails in this duty he sullies the name of his Primarch, as well as his chapter.

I envisage He’stan as haunted by the idea of what would happen should those two duties conflict with each other. Could he sacrifice innocent lives in the quest for the artifacts, or would he slight his Primarch - and the trust bestowed upon him - by sacrificing one of the nine great artifacts prophesised to herald the Primarch’s return, all to save those innocent lives? Could he betray his principles or would he risk everything his chapter has worked towards for the past ten thousand years just to save lives that will end anyway in fraction of that time?

Saying all of this, however, I do not see He’stan as being a dark, depressive character – far from it. I see him as being someone who will cleanse his doubts in the fires of battle, to decide what is the best cause of action when on the field, and worry about the consequences after the battle is won. He would be the quintessence of what it is to be a Salamander, absolutely certain that his actions are for the benefit of all around him, regardless of his personal feelings. He would carry the mantle placed upon him – both figuratively and literally – with a fierce pride; always showing an air of certainty and self-assurance about him that leaves none in doubt of his right to hold the rank of Forgefather.

What are your thoughts on this – do you picture him any differently? Will he even feature in your book, or is he an aspect of the Salamanders the does not fit into the scope of the story you intend to tell?

On top of all of this, the characterization of He’stan and how he is shaped by the task given to him, I am considering what would happen to the 4th Company after the great Captain He’stan has left it. Who would step forward to fill the power vacuum left by his departure? How would his loyal subordinates feel at having to take his place? Having lost their Captain in battle they would simply mourn his passing, honour his life and promote a replacement. But having their Captain essentially taken away from them how would they react to this? How would they deal with the leadership of the 4th company knowing that their rightful leader is not dead, but being lead away from them by a purpose higher than their own?

These are the questions that must be answered, and I feel it would be a very interesting story within itself, apart from the overarching action and war stories that my tale must include in the true tradition of Warhammer 40,000 fiction.

What are your thoughts on this Nick, if you can spare the time to share them?

Thanks for taking the time to read my wall of text, it is much appreciated.

29 October 2008 at 13:41  
Blogger David Johnston said...

Hello Nick :)

Sorry for the delay in commenting, real life kind of disappeared for a while due to work, But I am very happy to see Brother Argos (hopefully a techmarine) is appearing in the book, and the front cover looks amazing. I will be buying a good few copies to ensure it does well (and giving them to lots of people).

It is so good to see the Salamanders get some of the "love" they deserve and after chatting for a while I am confident you will be doing a wonderful job with them, your passion for their background and their distinct flavour was obvious!

Lets hope I don't get killed too soon :)

25 November 2008 at 09:55  
Blogger Nick Kyme said...

Hey Argos,

Great to see you on the blog at last.

Brother Argos (as in the Salamander in both the short story and the novel) is indeed a techmarine (a Master of the Forge, no less), and I have no plans to kill him off just yet. He kind of floats around the periphery in the short, but has a bigger role in the novel. I hope you like them both and await your feedback with great interest...

1 December 2008 at 17:31  

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